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Array ( [sid] => 152497 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let me go. . . [time] => 2009-08-23 08:31:36 [hometext] => Let me go. . . [bodytext] =>
Let me go. . . go. . .
with my highest thought.

Let me go. . . drift. . .
as fragrance upon the morning air.

Let me go. . . let me. . .
(become) (whole).

Let me go. . . let the blush
of evening leave me as aware.

Let me go. . . beyond. . .
the mark I'd set for myself.

Let me go. . . amidst the dust. . .
& gather principals of care.

Let me go. . . let my path. . .
wind to those in need.

Let me go. . . transcend. . .
medioctric stare.

Let me go. . .go without. . .
regard. . . become a circle (ling).

Let me go. . . let me shine. . .
encircle light. . . reflect my share. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 62 [informant] => elle [notes] => Edited per requests in Poem Edit and Deletion Requests Moderator_18 September 3 and 9, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

Let me go. . .

Contributed by elle on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 08:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Let me go. . . go. . .
with my highest thought.

Let me go. . . drift. . .
as fragrance upon the morning air.

Let me go. . . let me. . .
(become) (whole).

Let me go. . . let the blush
of evening leave me as aware.

Let me go. . . beyond. . .
the mark I'd set for myself.

Let me go. . . amidst the dust. . .
& gather principals of care.

Let me go. . . let my path. . .
wind to those in need.

Let me go. . . transcend. . .
medioctric stare.

Let me go. . .go without. . .
regard. . . become a circle (ling).

Let me go. . . let me shine. . .
encircle light. . . reflect my share.

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-08-23 08:31:36]
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Re: Let me go. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 12:30:39 PM AEST
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well woven words, a beautiful write,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Let me go. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 11:21:39 PM AEST
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I love this poem so much. It's uplifting and has a feeling of the person exhibiting strength, yet, at the same time, some angst. I also really like the way it reads...so...so, rhythmic.

Take care,

Tim

Re: Let me go. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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elle, at first I thought this might be about someone trying to hold you back, but
after reading it through to the end, (thrice), I have a much different emotion when
I read it now. It is (as Tim stated) very uplifting and moving. I get the same feeling
reading your piece as I do listening to Josh Groban sing, "Let Me Fall". It's beautiful, hun.

~ Breezy

Re: Let me go. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by hetlerkh on Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 03:58:20 PM AEST
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so sweet poem ....
i like it so much !

Re: Let me go. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 09:20:40 AM AEST
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This is awesome (lack of a better word) Thanks Elle for inspiration and your artistic grace.

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