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Oaken Door
Contributed by
screwge
on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 03:22:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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The cloak wavered on the elephant
So that God's filigrees
Might give a chance for plebe, pedestrian tracing
At a prosaic
Oaken door.
No more ambulating
At this smooth time, time of even-playing moss!
This is the venerating epoch
Today
And for you to reach.
Copyright ©
screwge
... [
2009-08-22 15:22:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Oaken Door
(User Rating: 1 ) by kye on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 03:36:40 PM AEST (User
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Your poem was smooth and quite beautiful. Although I haven't a clue what it is about, I thought your writing style was wonderful.
The level of mystery heightened the poem.
Enjoyed this one.
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Re: Oaken Door
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 05:09:12 PM AEST (User
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Very good poem choice of words was excellent
thought provoking good job |
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