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Array ( [sid] => 152448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => IF I LET GO MY [time] => 2009-08-21 23:22:00 [hometext] => Inspired by Kelly Brent saying, I should let the dark side out, that it might be interesting. [bodytext] => I'd paint you pictures every day.
You'd never, ever forget, oh yeah, Hey!
I'd stamp on your head, Pervert
For every time our angel hurt.

If I let go of my dark side
They'ed be no place for him to hide.
I'd cut off his privates
Shove them down his throat.
Nothing would come out but
Little zeros.
If I let go, yo!

You'd never touch her again.
In prison you'd have no friends.
You'd have perverted sex every day.
Still it wouldn't stop, No way!

I'd pull out your toe nails one by one.
Remind every day what you've done.
Our baby girl would never pay
For your ignorence every day.

I'd tare out your tounge, yeah.
You'd never lie again here or there.
Oh but i can't let darkness rule.
Sweet Jesus is my working tool.

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IF I LET GO MY

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 11:22:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'd paint you pictures every day.
You'd never, ever forget, oh yeah, Hey!
I'd stamp on your head, Pervert
For every time our angel hurt.

If I let go of my dark side
They'ed be no place for him to hide.
I'd cut off his privates
Shove them down his throat.
Nothing would come out but
Little zeros.
If I let go, yo!

You'd never touch her again.
In prison you'd have no friends.
You'd have perverted sex every day.
Still it wouldn't stop, No way!

I'd pull out your toe nails one by one.
Remind every day what you've done.
Our baby girl would never pay
For your ignorence every day.

I'd tare out your tounge, yeah.
You'd never lie again here or there.
Oh but i can't let darkness rule.
Sweet Jesus is my working tool.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2009-08-21 23:22:00]
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Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 12:30:22 AM AEST
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Em,

I so felt you here, this is raw power surging through your pen. I also understand each word of it, right to the core!

I am also so darn sorry that this happened, it really does leave wounds unrealised doesn't it?

You wrote a deeply emotive and incredible poem here dear lady.

I would help you, then I have one that needs the same dose! It still infuriates and makes me heart sick.........

Hugs you tight
loves you tons

Shall

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 06:00:21 AM AEST
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Yes I know exactly how you must feel ,these words hits home somewhere..........better to let it go and give it to the master yes!!!!!!!.....

LadyRose

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 01:52:24 PM AEST
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Awesome poetry! I hope this creep gets what he deserves which is all this and More!!!

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 07:05:36 PM AEST
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I'm glad I inspired you emy, but this is a sad poem, It does show your dark side. I hope I inspire you more often but I hope it's a happier subject, but great poem even if it is a dark subject

as always I hope to read more soon
-Kelly

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by hetlerkh on Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 07:34:20 PM AEST
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hey its so nice !
one more thng the name of it is already taken to a song for a band : "ESCAPE THE FATE"
and its a nice as well....
keep it up
t.c

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:42:43 PM AEST
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Oh my emy, holy heck! Your dark side is very dark indeed, but judging by
the subject, I think you may have toned it down a bit. I love the last two
lines. This was damn powerful, hun. And in all honesty, you have so much
more control over your dark side than I ever could of mine.

*hugs*
~ Breezy

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by MorguesMatter on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 03:24:21 AM AEST
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Bless your strength to keep faith, darkness is so tempting-Morgues

Re: IF I LET GO MY (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 04:52:10 PM AEST
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very touching...and yea u should never let the devil win god is always on your side and working in your favor

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