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I will never see what’s truly there
With all the lies you glued in my head and had me believing now I wish I was dead
I have been wishing for death for so many years always putting my mother in tears
Why have I let you take over my life why did I let you destroy so much years
Scars on my heart scars on my brain you made me go insane
You moved on years ago never thought twice and I’m stuck here in this hell dreading each moment of my life
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deamons of the past move on but the damage remains

Contributed by blackrose233 on Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 09:07:09 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Because of you I will always hate myself
I will never see what’s truly there
With all the lies you glued in my head and had me believing now I wish I was dead
I have been wishing for death for so many years always putting my mother in tears
Why have I let you take over my life why did I let you destroy so much years
Scars on my heart scars on my brain you made me go insane
You moved on years ago never thought twice and I’m stuck here in this hell dreading each moment of my life

Copyright Â© blackrose233 ... [ 2009-08-20 09:07:09]
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Re: deamons of the past move on but the damage remains (User Rating: 1 )
by rossdean on Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 09:30:29 AM AEST
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very moving and expressive you painted a picture as well as writing a poem

Re: deamons of the past move on but the damage remains (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 09:57:52 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
It's not your fault he was so insecure that he abused you.
HOPE HEALING COMES FOR YOU SOON.
I bet you're a very good person.
He's the loser.
Prayer, inner peace, healing, joy,
emy

Re: deamons of the past move on but the damage remains (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 03:28:14 PM AEST
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In a different way, I can relate to this. In middle school I was tormented and harassed to a point to wanting to end my life. High school was only slightly better. I thought things would get better in college but then I was falsely accused of Sexual harassment by the principal. She thinks everything is resolved but the damage she has done to me emotionally as well by the others have remain and will remain.

Anyway, Powerful poem! i hope things will somewhat get better for you!

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