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Array ( [sid] => 15240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cant feel me [time] => 2003-03-30 17:45:00 [hometext] => Nobody can feel the exact same as another
but Im sure that we all feel the same [bodytext] => No one can feel my pain my sorrow
livin for today just to live again tommorow
knowing damn well the day you die is soon to follow
It puts a hole in my heart and it hurts when I swallow

No one can feel my hurt my worry
why we have to live in such a damn hurry
knowing that tommorow will still come blurry
It lights a fire under me and Im fueled with fury

No one can feel my state my anger
why we have to live with a world of strangers
knowing damn well anyone could be a danger
does anybody else feel this life is a banger

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 14 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Cant feel me

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

No one can feel my pain my sorrow
livin for today just to live again tommorow
knowing damn well the day you die is soon to follow
It puts a hole in my heart and it hurts when I swallow

No one can feel my hurt my worry
why we have to live in such a damn hurry
knowing that tommorow will still come blurry
It lights a fire under me and Im fueled with fury

No one can feel my state my anger
why we have to live with a world of strangers
knowing damn well anyone could be a danger
does anybody else feel this life is a banger

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-03-30 17:45:00]
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Re: Cant feel me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fudge on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:13:13 PM AEST
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good poem :)

Re: Cant feel me (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:31:06 PM AEST
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Awesome! Great job! Blessed be,

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Re: Cant feel me (User Rating: 1 )
by vydana on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:28:23 PM AEST
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Great poem :)

Re: Cant feel me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:17:51 AM AEST
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i love this poem. i can relate to what you are saying. keep it up.

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