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not selfish
Contributed by
rossdean
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Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 06:16:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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your hand reaches out but you don't ask for help. you beleive your card has been dealt. no hope, too much dope. a young man hanged, or to be slammed. another door closes, too many doses, wrong diagnosis. he loved them so much with never a crutch. his head bowed he shouts aloud just as a storm cloud and away from the crowd.
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Re: not selfish
(User Rating: 1 ) by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 05:27:27 AM AEST (User
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Great Write!!! Finally I see A fellow poet being straight up real!! I felt I could directly relate to not only the words here,but the emotions being conveyed also!!
Keep Writing!!
Peace & HUgz,
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