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Bleed...
Contributed by
Obscured_Existance
on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 08:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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As the blood drips from this flesh of mine..
My cries you cannot hear
The pain I suffer deep inside
Cannot be much more clear
For I shall cry in silence
And watch the pain drip free
As I bleed out all my suffering
I want you to hear my plea
Please save me from this torture
I keep inside my head
The thoughts that make me cry to sleep
As I lay in my lonely bed..
Each scar can tell a story
Of my life and all its lows
The pain that I have felt
Released as my blood just flows
Will I ever free myself ?
Only time will show
Free from all this hurt inside
That i'll never know..
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Obscured_Existance
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2009-08-18 20:20:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 08:41:30 PM AEST (User
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Excellent!! You are able to put your pain into words that truly paint A clear and hurtful picture of what you must be going through!1 Please try not to tear yourself apart(literally)! I've been down the road your on now and travelling it only leaves you at a dead end and with many unhideable scars. Scars on your mind and your body as well as your soul and spirit!! Talk about it if you can but by all means KEEP WRITING!! It's a more valuable outlet for your pain than you can imagine!!
My prayers go out to you!
Peace & HUgz,
Dana |
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by jessb3 on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 10:04:27 PM AEST (User
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This is such a beautiful poem filled with pain and suffering. You express your feelings very well and I can definitely relate to some of the sentiments in it. |
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 12:57:20 AM AEST (User
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such a sad but well written description. it's good u r writing about these kinds of personal emotions, it helps u feel better i'm sure... keep writing if it does help.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 09:26:18 AM AEST (User
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Intense and emotional, great write.
-Phil |
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 05:38:02 AM AEST (User
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Very powerful and full of raw emotion.
How true, each scar does tell a story.Some people carry too many
Steve |
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilblkcat on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 12:34:34 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem. Keep writing. |
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Re: Bleed...
(User Rating: 1 ) by samii on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 08:22:04 AM AEST (User
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i love this poem,
i myself know how you feel sadly.
but im always told things will look up someday!
so we just have to hope for that i guess. |
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