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A beautiful view of the city
A landscape full of bright lights
As you can tell by my PJ's
Another sleepless night

Horns honk, cars speed by
I start to reminisce
as tears fall from my eye

Did I do it right?
Am I being to loud?
All my life
I tried to make you proud

No here I am with this view of the bay
Have I mentioned to you that today is the day

My thoughts are racing
Did I tell everyone goodbye?
I think of my kids
Uncontrollably I cry

It's time to jump the time is now
I try to step, but forgot how

I lean over the edge ready to drop
All of a sudden it's over
Thank you! Alarm clock [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 52 [informant] => sugarshane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Bridge Jumper

Contributed by sugarshane on Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 12:50:28 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

A beautiful view of the city
A landscape full of bright lights
As you can tell by my PJ's
Another sleepless night

Horns honk, cars speed by
I start to reminisce
as tears fall from my eye

Did I do it right?
Am I being to loud?
All my life
I tried to make you proud

No here I am with this view of the bay
Have I mentioned to you that today is the day

My thoughts are racing
Did I tell everyone goodbye?
I think of my kids
Uncontrollably I cry

It's time to jump the time is now
I try to step, but forgot how

I lean over the edge ready to drop
All of a sudden it's over
Thank you! Alarm clock

Copyright © sugarshane ... [ 2009-08-18 12:50:28]
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Re: Bridge Jumper (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 12:53:08 PM AEST
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nice ending (thank goodness). . . my heart was in my throat. . . elle :)

Re: Bridge Jumper (User Rating: 1 )
by orphani on Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 12:59:18 PM AEST
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when self doubt fills our minds we often magnf y the mistakes and forget all the kind loving things we did.no one ever gets it completely right. As you forgive you are forgiven.
o

Re: Bridge Jumper (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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whoa! crazy when dreams seem so real...good write, take care

-K.Z.

Re: Bridge Jumper (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST
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Glad it ended in this way, thanks to alarm clock right?
It is awful our daytime often slips inside our covers and haunts our dreams. We have to keep right on going though, dont we?

Intense and well written poem.

Hugs
Michelle

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