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Treehouse
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 08:18:43 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Magical dwelling,
secretly aloft in play,
child's utopia
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-08-16 20:18:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Treehouse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 11:03:07 PM AEST (User
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Definitely a "child's utopia". :-) |
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Re: Treehouse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 11:03:56 PM AEST (User
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the site went goofy. Also wanted to say, it'd still be fun for an adult. |
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Re: Treehouse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 11:05:02 PM AEST (User
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i used to go to my neighbor's/friend's treehouse, but it had alot of bugs around it haha. ur poem revived that fun scene of mine, except for the bugs part haha. nicely done again...
take care
-K.Z. |
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