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Instruments of expression. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 07:45:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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I. . . you. . . we. . . us. . . them
. . . all. . . many. . . more. . . every
each. . . one. . . blessed be
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-08-16 07:45:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Instruments of expression. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by orphani on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 02:52:06 PM AEST (User
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cool
i like the way you conformed this to your idea
might pick up a little power with vertical aspect.
altering word placement might also pack juice. i like it El.
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