Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:40:07 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 152202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Traditional Family Pathological Oven Competition, Yes! [time] => 2009-08-12 18:05:21 [hometext] => (Just roll with it. Language opens up when you abandon conventional meaning.) [bodytext] => Klondike utter failure.
The veins swirling into tides and Tom is watching, crying.
Toothaches molded into the asbestos.
Isn’t that funny?
Look at Tom’s watch it’s lazy.
Big hand moves when it’s convenient, little hand full of oatmeal and self-loathing ferocity.
Heat the can of vulture eyes, under the wooden canvas.
Jesus makes the wedding plans and cooks too much spaghetti.
Who in god’s name is gonna eat all that?

Bone salad tables. Other men’s searing agony.
Going somewhere memorablein time,
The quest to be forgotten, or otherwise despised in history.
You are not God’s brother, your hair is broken in folds and gaps,
Wavelengths and yellow streaks.
Scrape under the fingernails for
Chocolate, or maybe grapes.

Somewhere, a dog is laughing, so laugh too.
Numbers, patterns, spiders.
It’s the movement, the trance of good reason,
The devastation of undercooked seafood.
You’re not the Big Cheese, you’re James Howard,
You ate a flower yesterday for no good reason at all.
You talk sometimes on the phone, with squirrels.

Hungry telltale vines with yielding castle-like formations of jelly and bad aftertastes.
The gatekeeper beckons with an ivory hand,
Carpel-tunnel, poodle-rag, jungle hubcaps,
The book keeper waits.
Poop.
Delving into the ivy and liquidated profits,
Revenue nougat, deficit caramel,
My left kidney aspirations
and the things Ted said about gas stations in Cincinnati:
you can’t develop goats there.

Today we’re trying to navigate the dull,
The formation of sugar molecules under badger’s thumb.
The likeness of Tom Jones,
The memory of Simon’s hamster skin collection.
The blank stare of stoned dogs.

Diddy doesn’t do it daily
Or draining dad’s desert with the quiet salad tongs
And the longer ways of steady, forgiving words.
Doing everything.
Jealous of the nun closet,
It can see out the window to the beach where crabs battle.
No waves.
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 74 [informant] => Wakingdream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => surreal )
Traditional Family Pathological Oven Competition, Yes!

Contributed by Wakingdream on Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 06:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal



Klondike utter failure.
The veins swirling into tides and Tom is watching, crying.
Toothaches molded into the asbestos.
Isn’t that funny?
Look at Tom’s watch it’s lazy.
Big hand moves when it’s convenient, little hand full of oatmeal and self-loathing ferocity.
Heat the can of vulture eyes, under the wooden canvas.
Jesus makes the wedding plans and cooks too much spaghetti.
Who in god’s name is gonna eat all that?

Bone salad tables. Other men’s searing agony.
Going somewhere memorablein time,
The quest to be forgotten, or otherwise despised in history.
You are not God’s brother, your hair is broken in folds and gaps,
Wavelengths and yellow streaks.
Scrape under the fingernails for
Chocolate, or maybe grapes.

Somewhere, a dog is laughing, so laugh too.
Numbers, patterns, spiders.
It’s the movement, the trance of good reason,
The devastation of undercooked seafood.
You’re not the Big Cheese, you’re James Howard,
You ate a flower yesterday for no good reason at all.
You talk sometimes on the phone, with squirrels.

Hungry telltale vines with yielding castle-like formations of jelly and bad aftertastes.
The gatekeeper beckons with an ivory hand,
Carpel-tunnel, poodle-rag, jungle hubcaps,
The book keeper waits.
Poop.
Delving into the ivy and liquidated profits,
Revenue nougat, deficit caramel,
My left kidney aspirations
and the things Ted said about gas stations in Cincinnati:
you can’t develop goats there.

Today we’re trying to navigate the dull,
The formation of sugar molecules under badger’s thumb.
The likeness of Tom Jones,
The memory of Simon’s hamster skin collection.
The blank stare of stoned dogs.

Diddy doesn’t do it daily
Or draining dad’s desert with the quiet salad tongs
And the longer ways of steady, forgiving words.
Doing everything.
Jealous of the nun closet,
It can see out the window to the beach where crabs battle.
No waves.




Copyright © Wakingdream ... [ 2009-08-12 18:05:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.


While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com