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Array ( [sid] => 152163 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unaware [time] => 2009-08-11 10:01:39 [hometext] => The course of true love never did run smooth, when do we know when to give up? Or by letting go are you the stronger person. This was origionally written as a song, the poem version will be up shortly. [bodytext] => It feels like we’ve been through this before
Every time I’m leavin’ you stop me at your door
I get pulled back into where it’s good again
And all we have to do is pretend

We played the dating game
Since then nothing has been the same
We were 13 just two kids at a fair
At that time we were unaware

You took my heart
But something tore us apart
All we have to do is pretend
We could start it all over again

It feels like we’ve been through this before
Every time I’m leavin’ you stop me at your door

2 years pass and we cross paths
We agreed that this time it would last

You have my heart
But something tears us apart
All we have to do is pretend
We could start all over again
It feels like we’ve been through this before
Every time I’m leavin’ you stop me at the door

We keep on travelling down the same road
Each time it seems we hit a dead end
We are going different ways
There’s no use holding on to what’s not the same

You’ve always had my heart
But something keeps us apart
Oh no, I won’t pretend
Oh no, I won’t pretend
No, Not again

We’ve been through this before
I’m leavin’, and you won’t stop me at your door anymore
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Carmela [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Unaware

Contributed by Carmela on Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 10:01:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It feels like we’ve been through this before
Every time I’m leavin’ you stop me at your door
I get pulled back into where it’s good again
And all we have to do is pretend

We played the dating game
Since then nothing has been the same
We were 13 just two kids at a fair
At that time we were unaware

You took my heart
But something tore us apart
All we have to do is pretend
We could start it all over again

It feels like we’ve been through this before
Every time I’m leavin’ you stop me at your door

2 years pass and we cross paths
We agreed that this time it would last

You have my heart
But something tears us apart
All we have to do is pretend
We could start all over again
It feels like we’ve been through this before
Every time I’m leavin’ you stop me at the door

We keep on travelling down the same road
Each time it seems we hit a dead end
We are going different ways
There’s no use holding on to what’s not the same

You’ve always had my heart
But something keeps us apart
Oh no, I won’t pretend
Oh no, I won’t pretend
No, Not again

We’ve been through this before
I’m leavin’, and you won’t stop me at your door anymore




Copyright © Carmela ... [ 2009-08-11 10:01:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Unaware (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 08:42:22 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful... I love it.
I would love to hear it being sung...

Welcome to YPDC... Looking forward to reading more of your work..
Jenni




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