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Array ( [sid] => 152134 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Set Me Free [time] => 2009-08-10 14:10:34 [hometext] => :( [bodytext] => The pain inside me I can’t stand
Why they ignore me now I understand,
As tears flow through my eyes and hit the floor
The happiness inside me is no more.

The dreams inside me are all gone
This Sorrow in my life is born.
I can’t run, I see no another way
All I know is this pain will forever stay.

You stare at me you can hear me cry
You know what I feel and that I want to die
I love you Lord, but look at me
Look upon my life, Don’t you have some pity ?

Dear God is it too much to ask ?
If I begged you will you complete this task ?
Bring my life to an end
With no more hope in a form of a fake friend.

As I pray right now
Please answers my prayer somehow
But don’t take too long
Let me go to the place where I belong.

- Shuberth Dias - [comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Shuberth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Set Me Free

Contributed by Shuberth on Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:10:34 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The pain inside me I can’t stand
Why they ignore me now I understand,
As tears flow through my eyes and hit the floor
The happiness inside me is no more.

The dreams inside me are all gone
This Sorrow in my life is born.
I can’t run, I see no another way
All I know is this pain will forever stay.

You stare at me you can hear me cry
You know what I feel and that I want to die
I love you Lord, but look at me
Look upon my life, Don’t you have some pity ?

Dear God is it too much to ask ?
If I begged you will you complete this task ?
Bring my life to an end
With no more hope in a form of a fake friend.

As I pray right now
Please answers my prayer somehow
But don’t take too long
Let me go to the place where I belong.

- Shuberth Dias -

Copyright Â© Shuberth ... [ 2009-08-10 14:10:34]
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Re: Set Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by bubkin on Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:35:49 PM AEST
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This really speaks to the reader. full of raw emotion that pretty much comes through the screen to touch my heart . very good write x

Re: Set Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:46:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece full of emotion. I feel sorrow in each line. Excellent flow as well. I hope happiness comes back in your life. I am feeling very down today as well. Again great piece of writing.

--Heidi

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