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Array ( [sid] => 151975 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Millions of miles away [time] => 2009-08-03 17:53:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Millions of miles away
Can’t think of words to say
I know that I love you
But how do I tell you that I do

I want the words to amaze you
Take your breath away
But I don’t know what to say
What should I do?

I want you to know I love you
I really do
But I don’t know what to say
And it doesn’t help we’re a million miles away

I want to find another way
To say I love you
I want the words to amaze you
What should I do? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Millions of miles away

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 05:53:44 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Millions of miles away
Can’t think of words to say
I know that I love you
But how do I tell you that I do

I want the words to amaze you
Take your breath away
But I don’t know what to say
What should I do?

I want you to know I love you
I really do
But I don’t know what to say
And it doesn’t help we’re a million miles away

I want to find another way
To say I love you
I want the words to amaze you
What should I do?

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-08-03 17:53:44]
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Re: Millions of miles away (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagacious on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 06:46:37 PM AEST
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You know, that really hits home, because my girlfriend sees that I deal in all this poetry, yet wonders why I have such a hard time coalescing my thoughts into a decent love poem. What she doesn't realize is that the desire is there, but with it comes an absolute need to make the words...well, amazing, as you say. How can I commit these feelings to poetic language if I cannot form them in the most perfect way possible? This is, of course, self-defeating behavior, and the fear which must prevent many beautiful works of art from being created.

Yet, you have faced that fear, and have created a piece which does convey the power of the emotion you feel, if even in a roundabout way. For that I commend you--with eternal thanks for the inspiration you provide. Appreciatively,

-Kris-

Re: Millions of miles away (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:14:47 PM AEST
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I agree with what Kris said, if I were you I would show her this poem. And...... never never wait to tell someone you love them, just come right out and say it I love you!

Good poem

Michelle

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