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[sid] => 151947
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Krystal Who
[time] => 2009-08-02 17:57:08
[hometext] => This poem is dedicated to Krystal. A dear friend and quite like a sister.
[bodytext] => Krystal who can see the bright side in everything
And asks, "Is that all?"
Who is clothes and earrings
Smiles and friendship
Whose smile spreads through everyone in the room
Who tells me everything
Who tells me about her life
Whose heart is as warm as a sunny day
Is trying her best to look great
Is giving people stuff
Is sometimes mad
Who has three wonderful kids
Is a very good mother
Asking, "Is that all?"
"Is that all?"
[comments] => 1
[counter] => 172
[topic] => 55
[informant] => sarahmay1995
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 0
[ratings] => 0
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => dedicatedpoems
)
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Re: Krystal Who
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 07:38:21 AM AEST (User
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Very good. You've got the one thing necessary to be a real poet; talent. I can tell by the way you construct your metaphors. You've got it.
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