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Pushing in the semblence, of bliss...that sleepy white haze
As I watch my innocence drift further away
Even my lips are quivering
So, euphoric, my heart beats faint

Sweet serum, moisturizing my arteries
The bevel, plunging in all of life's happiness
In a single dose
Takes me back to the moments
It made me dreamy comatose
And as my fibres get enlightened
My eyes beam with joy
My best friend has his arms wrapped so tightly around me
My head is laying against his heart
The beating sends a soft lullaby
That releases me into nothing but.
Light.

After heroin the world is just so
Dread, Rush
Pressure for dapper, luxe
Those worries they outside are forced to
Nurture. If only they
Knew.

Voices are whispering. Comforting
...'everything will be ok'
Are the inside. Or outside my mind?
It doesn't matter
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After Heroin the World is Just So...

Contributed by amber_vonhorror on Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 08:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

The hypodermic scratches the inside of my vein
Pushing in the semblence, of bliss...that sleepy white haze
As I watch my innocence drift further away
Even my lips are quivering
So, euphoric, my heart beats faint

Sweet serum, moisturizing my arteries
The bevel, plunging in all of life's happiness
In a single dose
Takes me back to the moments
It made me dreamy comatose
And as my fibres get enlightened
My eyes beam with joy
My best friend has his arms wrapped so tightly around me
My head is laying against his heart
The beating sends a soft lullaby
That releases me into nothing but.
Light.

After heroin the world is just so
Dread, Rush
Pressure for dapper, luxe
Those worries they outside are forced to
Nurture. If only they
Knew.

Voices are whispering. Comforting
...'everything will be ok'
Are the inside. Or outside my mind?
It doesn't matter
Nothing else matters.

Copyright © amber_vonhorror ... [ 2009-07-29 20:38:08]
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Re: After Heroin the World is Just So... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 05:42:41 AM AEST
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A quality poem, very vivid.

-phil

Re: After Heroin the World is Just So... (User Rating: 1 )
by beast024 on Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 07:13:21 AM AEST
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Thought your work was done well, although the subject matter for me is all to real as I have lost 5 friends to your beloved serum.

Re: After Heroin the World is Just So... (User Rating: 1 )
by acounts21 on Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 07:28:40 PM AEST
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this takes me back. brings back all those familiar feelings that i tried to forget. ever hear "heroin girl" by everclear? lol that was my life in a nutshell.

Re: After Heroin the World is Just So... (User Rating: 1 )
by Cheshire on Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 07:42:09 PM AEST
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So beautifully written. I really dig this "my best friend has his arms wrapped so tightly around me my head is laying against his heart."

Captures the feeling perfectly.

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