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Array ( [sid] => 151812 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untamed [time] => 2009-07-29 19:43:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Draw closer to me now
I have a secret to share
I’m planning an escape
to break free from this damned lare

Broken; their hearts and souls
these weary tramps about me
given to amusement
fenced thought; the final decree

Oh, how I long for more
the sweet scent of unkept grass
unafraid, untamed mirth
liberal thought; the real class

There’s been sense, however
in the path we have taken
many hands make light work
this truth, hence, not forsaken

Yet man now shackles man
time and time it’s seen again
endless are the reasons
to fight another campaign

Blindness is the result
a life in ignorant bliss
swimming becomes harder
deeper into the abyss

Draw ever closer now
for I can see; you too dare
to stretch your aching limbs
and break free from this damned lare

There is reason, passion
in the lust for something more
the smell of unkept grass
is just beyond that steel door

Learning from the dark past
aspiring for real growth
both modern and in touch
untamed, yes, you and I both.

30/07/2009 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 14 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Untamed

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 07:43:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Draw closer to me now
I have a secret to share
I’m planning an escape
to break free from this damned lare

Broken; their hearts and souls
these weary tramps about me
given to amusement
fenced thought; the final decree

Oh, how I long for more
the sweet scent of unkept grass
unafraid, untamed mirth
liberal thought; the real class

There’s been sense, however
in the path we have taken
many hands make light work
this truth, hence, not forsaken

Yet man now shackles man
time and time it’s seen again
endless are the reasons
to fight another campaign

Blindness is the result
a life in ignorant bliss
swimming becomes harder
deeper into the abyss

Draw ever closer now
for I can see; you too dare
to stretch your aching limbs
and break free from this damned lare

There is reason, passion
in the lust for something more
the smell of unkept grass
is just beyond that steel door

Learning from the dark past
aspiring for real growth
both modern and in touch
untamed, yes, you and I both.

30/07/2009

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2009-07-29 19:43:10]
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Re: Untamed (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:05:33 PM AEST
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Free that untamed heart, my brother. Ovations to the same! :) elle

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