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Hypnotized
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 08:42:30 PM in AEST
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I’ve realized
That I’m hypnotized
By your voice
You’ve made me unable to make a choice
Of my own I’m hypnotized
By you
I’ve realized
I’ll do what you want me to do
I’m mesmerized
By your voice
I have no choice
When I look into your eyes
Rational thought melts away
I’ll do whatever you say
I’ve realized
That I’m hypnotized
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-07-28 20:42:30]
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Re: Hypnotized
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 08:51:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing here. You capture the hypnotic state effectively here.
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Re: Hypnotized
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 06:58:54 AM AEST
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Nice very nice, good expression and well thought meaning....
However here in lies the conundrum when hypnotised I do believe you don't know your hypnotised and the moment your realisation is aware your hypnotised then you no longer remain hypnotised. |
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Re: Hypnotized
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 09:22:28 AM AEST
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I like this, nothing better than being that in love! Nicely done!
Michelle |
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