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The Side Show
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
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Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 01:13:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I WENT TO THE SIDE SHOW.
WILLINGLY ... AMUSINGLY.
SOMEHOW ... ... VALIDATING.
BEING HUDDLED SAFE AMONG THE OTHERS.
SEEING ALL I CAME TO SEE.
WHAT I PAID FOR.
BLIND TO ... ... THE COURAGE ... THE GRACE.
I SEE IT NOW.
... ... ... ALWAYS LATE.
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
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2009-07-27 13:13:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Side Show
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 08:37:57 PM AEST (User
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Interesting write the end had a double meaning to it to me...... I like those lol.
Though the caps I do not like, but that is just me, it is always distracting for me in poetry with all caps. Other than that I will watch for more of your work.
Welcome to ypdc
Michelle
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