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Midnight Umbrella - Ten minutes
Contributed by
poluxthefifth
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Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 12:48:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What if I found you?
Yellow clouds upon my tears
And a name, deep inside.
Morning view of my dreams,
delicious cold breeze
Don´t you see me?
Oh, what a slow heartbeat.
What a breakable mountain,
what a killing night.
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2009-07-27 12:48:32]
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Ten minutes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:31:55 AM AEST
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I am stunned by your impeccable use of metaphors. Your
writing style is so exquisite. I could drown in it forever, never
needing to come up for air.
Very moving.
~ Breezy |
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