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Array ( [sid] => 151736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promises [time] => 2009-07-27 09:06:53 [hometext] => Just a thought,a lingering a moment of looking back at the past in present... [bodytext] => Promises

Do you remember you promised me you'll always be there?
Even though we are miles away
in thought and in person.
You said you will never leave
yet I am left with a scar and the envy
thats patient and innocent...

You promised me a ring on my finger,
life long promise
till death do us part.
But you lied and some other lady has the price
I thought I won...
I should have been her
Because till this day
I love you the same


You promised you will never do me harm.
Yet you left me bleeding for life.
Luckily you have what you wanted,
I will not forget that I promised though,
to remember you even through the pain
Hope she makes you happy
Because we died with every promise you made. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LadyRose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Promises

Contributed by LadyRose on Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 09:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Promises

Do you remember you promised me you'll always be there?
Even though we are miles away
in thought and in person.
You said you will never leave
yet I am left with a scar and the envy
thats patient and innocent...

You promised me a ring on my finger,
life long promise
till death do us part.
But you lied and some other lady has the price
I thought I won...
I should have been her
Because till this day
I love you the same


You promised you will never do me harm.
Yet you left me bleeding for life.
Luckily you have what you wanted,
I will not forget that I promised though,
to remember you even through the pain
Hope she makes you happy
Because we died with every promise you made.




Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-07-27 09:06:53]
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Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by PoluxTheFifth on Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 01:01:42 PM AEST
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Very emotional and modern....
I love the last line...
you should start a poem with that line


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 07:03:13 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching write here, well written but I am so sorry for your pain. I think those men do not get it at times do they?

Hugs
Michelle


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 10:16:32 AM AEST
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What a moving piece this is, tied together with emotion that it seems to struggle to contain.
The last line just stays in the memory !!

Steve




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