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or fall into rainbows of endless light,
or crash into mornings of bluish wings,
or kiss the sun, or dance, or fly.

Don´t want to love you,
or call on your name in the midst of night,
or silence the ocean to hear you, shy;
or close the door, or pray, or shine.

Don´t want to love you,
or sing the confessions of my lost mind,
or bring the pretentions of my desire,
or stay, or watch, or smile.

Don´t want to love you,
or rain upon your face like sweet wine,
or say the forgiveness that heals my life,
or sleep, or try, or fight.

Don´t want to love you,
but I´m lost in the deep of your dreaming eyes;
I have no reason, I cannot hide,
I already love you, when will my heart be mine? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 2 [informant] => PoluxTheFifth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Midnight Umbrella - Denial

Contributed by PoluxTheFifth on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 09:14:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Don´t want to love you,
or fall into rainbows of endless light,
or crash into mornings of bluish wings,
or kiss the sun, or dance, or fly.

Don´t want to love you,
or call on your name in the midst of night,
or silence the ocean to hear you, shy;
or close the door, or pray, or shine.

Don´t want to love you,
or sing the confessions of my lost mind,
or bring the pretentions of my desire,
or stay, or watch, or smile.

Don´t want to love you,
or rain upon your face like sweet wine,
or say the forgiveness that heals my life,
or sleep, or try, or fight.

Don´t want to love you,
but I´m lost in the deep of your dreaming eyes;
I have no reason, I cannot hide,
I already love you, when will my heart be mine?

Copyright Â© PoluxTheFifth ... [ 2009-07-26 09:14:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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I love this! :) elle

Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 03:30:24 PM AEST
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Wow. Stunning metaphors and a lovely elegance too. This is how poetry should be written. 5/5.

-phil

Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by bubkin on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 03:48:32 PM AEST
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this is true poetry , u r very talented x

Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by PoluxTheFifth on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 03:50:59 PM AEST
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Thanks for your lovely comments.
I´m an english teacher in Colombia, South America.
English is my second language.. I learned it by myself, so please, forgive any mistake.

Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 05:15:07 PM AEST
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I agree with everyone else...this is GREAT poetry. Can't wait for more!!

Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 07:43:35 PM AEST
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I concur with Elle.

This line is classic... love it:

but I´m lost in the deep of your dreaming eyes

Welcome to YPDC.

Tim
:-)

Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:19:57 AM AEST
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I was referred to your work by a friend and I'm so glad he did.

This is, simply put, stunning. It's been a long time since a piece on YPDC
moved me in this way. Every verse is like a gentle breeze that builds
in momentum to a gust of emotional overflow. It staggers the heart.

Absolutely beautiful.

~ Breezy

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