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Array ( [sid] => 151710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All Time Low [time] => 2009-07-25 23:57:33 [hometext] => i found some old poems i wrote when i felt nothing was right. everything seemed so wrong, this was about 3 to 4 years ago, about the same time frame as my other peoms were posted, just wanted to share it on here. let me know what you think [bodytext] => Do you ever sit in front of your window
Thinking how nice it would be to let go
Have you ever felt so down
That you knew it was your all time low

Sitting in bed
Im thinking of it all
And how nice it would be to grab it
And to just have another fall

When you cant breathe
You know your doing it right
Just hold it and don’t let go
Let yourself slip into the night

The pills in your stomach
Taking them two by two
Just keep going
When the bottle is empty you are through

After everything that you did
You lay into bed
Hoping you don’t wake up the next morning
Because you are wishing you were dead
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sbhottie288 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

All Time Low

Contributed by sbhottie288 on Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 11:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Do you ever sit in front of your window
Thinking how nice it would be to let go
Have you ever felt so down
That you knew it was your all time low

Sitting in bed
Im thinking of it all
And how nice it would be to grab it
And to just have another fall

When you cant breathe
You know your doing it right
Just hold it and don’t let go
Let yourself slip into the night

The pills in your stomach
Taking them two by two
Just keep going
When the bottle is empty you are through

After everything that you did
You lay into bed
Hoping you don’t wake up the next morning
Because you are wishing you were dead

Copyright Â© sbhottie288 ... [ 2009-07-25 23:57:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: All Time Low (User Rating: 1 )
by bubkin on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 07:39:23 AM AEST
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very touching and real , full of true emotion. beautifully written and honest . thank you for sharing it

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