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Array ( [sid] => 151694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The last breath [time] => 2009-07-25 08:15:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => its a strange feeling this one in my heart
the same one i felt everytime we were apart

and when we were together i felt such pride
the love i have for you i cannot hide

you have been gone now for nearly a year
and not a day goes by when i dont shed a tear

my life was perfect with u around
and now ure away and i wish u had been found

the soft lapping of the cold blue sea
the very thing that took you away from me

Its gently hitting againt my skin
there is nothing left to do now , i cannot win

its slowly surrounding me and a feel no fear
because i know in time , i will find you near

as i take my last breathe i can hear your sighs
and as i sink to the bottom i just close my eyes

your hand around mine as my last breath escapes
and we're walking together through the pearly gates [comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bubkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The last breath

Contributed by bubkin on Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 08:15:41 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

its a strange feeling this one in my heart
the same one i felt everytime we were apart

and when we were together i felt such pride
the love i have for you i cannot hide

you have been gone now for nearly a year
and not a day goes by when i dont shed a tear

my life was perfect with u around
and now ure away and i wish u had been found

the soft lapping of the cold blue sea
the very thing that took you away from me

Its gently hitting againt my skin
there is nothing left to do now , i cannot win

its slowly surrounding me and a feel no fear
because i know in time , i will find you near

as i take my last breathe i can hear your sighs
and as i sink to the bottom i just close my eyes

your hand around mine as my last breath escapes
and we're walking together through the pearly gates

Copyright © bubkin ... [ 2009-07-25 08:15:41]
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Re: The last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 07:57:53 PM AEST
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Again, I'm so sorry for your loss.
Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
Great writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: The last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by thesweetestsin65 on Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 09:11:11 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful!

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