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Array ( [sid] => 151684 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodnight [time] => 2009-07-24 18:38:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pain is love Pictures, Images and Photos

Goodnight



A druken night but words held true

Leading to exaggerated actions

Two young vulnerable hearts meet

Both tainted with different malice's




One pleads for the kiss of the raven

And the other is working towards it

Neither knew just how deep in water

The other one wade




Love was thrust upon them both

And not discreetly at that

Guilt constrained their emotions

And bound them only to affair




She had fallen for him completely

Giving even the shirt off her back

He held onto a painful pleasure

Oppressing the only one who cared




Falling deeper into dismay

Crying rivers red but never tears

She wove herself knew scars

Each one telling of her vibrant pain




He told her of his affection

Towards her and another as well

Culpability eating at him

Like a vulture upon the deceased




Both possessive over one another

Yet they had no right at all

She was more tolerant

But silence says so much more




The days went on and go no better

Sorrow simulated behind forged bliss

The ease misjudged and transient

Thier confusion only rising




Assuring adoration to two

He tells the same story twice

Yet the truth can only lie

Within one fable




Knowing all along

She plays the hand; inteneded ignorance

If only to delay her heart

This one last defeat




Never occuring to him

Games arent fun for all the players

Winners are never labeled sore

For they dont know the feeling




Beggining to move past

Starting to forget it all

Trying to act with just

But who determines right from wrong




Then the tables were turned

Or so he thought

Accusations filled the air

No one ever left room for concern




A girls who's innocence

Pierced the eyes of gods angels

Felt the sorrow of the world

Inflicted by her own undeniable shame




You could call it Romeo and Juliet

However it was a twisted version

For Juliet died but not for love

And her Romeo followed but not for her




Without realization of it

Both had been faced with the question

Of whether to give your heart to

Who loves you, or rather who you love




A twisted love triangle of suicides

A borderline of disorder

A Juliet and A Romeo kissed the blade

Forever together, forever goodnight.

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Goodnight

Contributed by CursedKiss on Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 06:38:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Pain is love Pictures, Images and Photos

Goodnight



A druken night but words held true

Leading to exaggerated actions

Two young vulnerable hearts meet

Both tainted with different malice's




One pleads for the kiss of the raven

And the other is working towards it

Neither knew just how deep in water

The other one wade




Love was thrust upon them both

And not discreetly at that

Guilt constrained their emotions

And bound them only to affair




She had fallen for him completely

Giving even the shirt off her back

He held onto a painful pleasure

Oppressing the only one who cared




Falling deeper into dismay

Crying rivers red but never tears

She wove herself knew scars

Each one telling of her vibrant pain




He told her of his affection

Towards her and another as well

Culpability eating at him

Like a vulture upon the deceased




Both possessive over one another

Yet they had no right at all

She was more tolerant

But silence says so much more




The days went on and go no better

Sorrow simulated behind forged bliss

The ease misjudged and transient

Thier confusion only rising




Assuring adoration to two

He tells the same story twice

Yet the truth can only lie

Within one fable




Knowing all along

She plays the hand; inteneded ignorance

If only to delay her heart

This one last defeat




Never occuring to him

Games arent fun for all the players

Winners are never labeled sore

For they dont know the feeling




Beggining to move past

Starting to forget it all

Trying to act with just

But who determines right from wrong




Then the tables were turned

Or so he thought

Accusations filled the air

No one ever left room for concern




A girls who's innocence

Pierced the eyes of gods angels

Felt the sorrow of the world

Inflicted by her own undeniable shame




You could call it Romeo and Juliet

However it was a twisted version

For Juliet died but not for love

And her Romeo followed but not for her




Without realization of it

Both had been faced with the question

Of whether to give your heart to

Who loves you, or rather who you love




A twisted love triangle of suicides

A borderline of disorder

A Juliet and A Romeo kissed the blade

Forever together, forever goodnight.





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Re: Goodnight (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 08:08:00 PM AEST
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A beautifully painful write. I especially respond to the fifth stanza as this relates to
someone in my life who was both delicate & extreme. Nicely done :) elle




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