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Array ( [sid] => 151672 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Robot Man [time] => 2009-07-24 13:40:48 [hometext] => sorry if this confuses anyone, it just my curent situation with a british lover of mine. =) [bodytext] => ring ring

you tell me you get hypnotized
literally hypnotherapy.

that you do interviews on the radio
what happened to your nerves?

haven't touched a fag in 5 days
o.c.d.s cleared up,

you listen to Royksopp..

you say your not afraid of flying,
that your gonna find me

you say you love me.

you say: "it feels like being on a permanent drug.. a happy one."

i dont like this.

i just wanted to know, ALL i wanted to know is
where the hell you've been?

could have left me with something, anything
rather than the silence that followed your absence

you've changed.
you're a robot man now.
i have to get to know you all over again

was gonna leave you, erase you, now, i've got a fever

a crooked smile stroked my face
im highly confused

talk soon. beep.

reep the elusiveness.

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Robot Man

Contributed by CharminglyAwkward on Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 01:40:48 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

ring ring

you tell me you get hypnotized
literally hypnotherapy.

that you do interviews on the radio
what happened to your nerves?

haven't touched a fag in 5 days
o.c.d.s cleared up,

you listen to Royksopp..

you say your not afraid of flying,
that your gonna find me

you say you love me.

you say: "it feels like being on a permanent drug.. a happy one."

i dont like this.

i just wanted to know, ALL i wanted to know is
where the hell you've been?

could have left me with something, anything
rather than the silence that followed your absence

you've changed.
you're a robot man now.
i have to get to know you all over again

was gonna leave you, erase you, now, i've got a fever

a crooked smile stroked my face
im highly confused

talk soon. beep.

reep the elusiveness.

Copyright © CharminglyAwkward ... [ 2009-07-24 13:40:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Robot Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 03:50:40 PM AEST
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Crikey, this brings back memories for me. I was the robotic Brit, she was the vivacious american. *sigh*.

He best become human soon, after you've loved an american girl, no one else can make your heart beat in the same way. British girls become a pathetic imitation of the american love that you crave.

I've rambled too much already. Good luck. Good poem.

-Phil

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