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Array ( [sid] => 151624 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ink quest [time] => 2009-07-22 08:58:20 [hometext] => I tweaked/messed with an old poem of mine... [bodytext] => reckless drinker
ignoring the battle
lost swilling
with beaten abandon
as your cheat sheets
burn in the sack
my object(s)(ion)
of mystique hold
worlds at bay

his sorry will over
full ashtrays watch
your step over empty
bottles balance
old memories
old damage
at the mercy
of dry ink sentences
writing/righting
wrongs

the out beyond
forever reads
of endless
waiting
at the edge
of sorrow
I do not belong
at the end
to wander off
unobserved
in a ripple of air

scan for magic
of my nature
where the
ground is true
slur my peace/piece
hesitation hums
loose dark
collects midnight
static smashing
code twirls
she/we/me
I am free.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

ink quest

Contributed by ming on Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 08:58:20 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

reckless drinker
ignoring the battle
lost swilling
with beaten abandon
as your cheat sheets
burn in the sack
my object(s)(ion)
of mystique hold
worlds at bay

his sorry will over
full ashtrays watch
your step over empty
bottles balance
old memories
old damage
at the mercy
of dry ink sentences
writing/righting
wrongs

the out beyond
forever reads
of endless
waiting
at the edge
of sorrow
I do not belong
at the end
to wander off
unobserved
in a ripple of air

scan for magic
of my nature
where the
ground is true
slur my peace/piece
hesitation hums
loose dark
collects midnight
static smashing
code twirls
she/we/me
I am free.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2009-07-22 08:58:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ink quest (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 11:49:13 AM AEST
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This is excellent. A wonderfully unique write.

-Phil

Re: ink quest (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 09:57:57 PM AEST
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interesting write. very different. nicely done.

Re: ink quest (User Rating: 1 )
by Cathi on Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 02:10:35 AM AEST
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What an excellent combination of words. This is a poem to read and reread to make many meanings. Very nice!

Cathi

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