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Array ( [sid] => 151605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => excerpt [time] => 2009-07-21 06:35:47 [hometext] => for all those we've lost. . . [bodytext] => still. . .

there is that one thing. . .

a tiny scar of passage

resembling teardrop,

fallen

it is etched

into the layer of my heart

known only as ache

I found it there, apparent

by accident, one day

tettering between

a thought

& a memory of you

a pleasantry. . .

for my grief

turned misery [comments] => 5 [counter] => 344 [topic] => 8 [informant] => elle [notes] => Edited per request in Poem Edit and Deletion Requests Moderator_18 September 3, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

excerpt

Contributed by elle on Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 06:35:47 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

still. . .

there is that one thing. . .

a tiny scar of passage

resembling teardrop,

fallen

it is etched

into the layer of my heart

known only as ache

I found it there, apparent

by accident, one day

tettering between

a thought

& a memory of you

a pleasantry. . .

for my grief

turned misery

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-07-21 06:35:47]
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Re: excerpt (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 07:01:39 AM AEST
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elle,

beautiful and succint capture of the moment, the human experience - your words led to an involuntary recollection of same. Powerful stuff to insinuate in a few lines of recall.

Spike

Re: excerpt (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 01:05:05 PM AEST
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Moving. You are an amazing writer the way each word goes so far. I am nearly brought to tears here remembering someone I lost. Truly amazing!

Re: excerpt (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 09:02:20 PM AEST
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That is great Elle.. with all the lost surrounding me over the past year, this write touched me and made me a little upset.
You have a beautiful talent for writing.
Tim

Re: excerpt (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 10:36:34 PM AEST
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This , my dear, is excellent !!!

Re: excerpt (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 10:53:13 AM AEST
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great write, as always for you.

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