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Array ( [sid] => 151559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A fitting end [time] => 2009-07-18 11:49:15 [hometext] => written when one of my favorite sites closed, does anyone really know anyone or just what they're shown? [bodytext] => You are there and I am here
the only thing that I do care
you'll only see a half of me
the only half I let you see

what now is fair for you to care
that I am here and you are there
tis all I see .... you show to me
is all I'll ever see of thee

For when this venue, it will end
the masses scattered into the wind
all to go their separate way
in hope to find a place to stay

and find they will, this place live
with all new friends, to purpose give
bestow to thee and all of these
a lasting place, eternal peace

So from thy lips say no goodbyes
no saddened faces, nor teary eyes
the only thing my friends to tell
a loving smile and a soft farewell
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A fitting end

Contributed by UnknownLegend on Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 11:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

You are there and I am here
the only thing that I do care
you'll only see a half of me
the only half I let you see

what now is fair for you to care
that I am here and you are there
tis all I see .... you show to me
is all I'll ever see of thee

For when this venue, it will end
the masses scattered into the wind
all to go their separate way
in hope to find a place to stay

and find they will, this place live
with all new friends, to purpose give
bestow to thee and all of these
a lasting place, eternal peace

So from thy lips say no goodbyes
no saddened faces, nor teary eyes
the only thing my friends to tell
a loving smile and a soft farewell

Copyright © UnknownLegend ... [ 2009-07-18 11:49:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A fitting end (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 03:19:28 PM AEST
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David,
a beautiful and fitting write.
It is hard to lose touch, it seems it happens
more often than not these days, with net friends and in the real world.
I hope you stay, I have missed ya.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: A fitting end (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th July 2009 @ 04:59:58 AM AEST
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a biting poem, it certainly makes you think.

-phil

Re: A fitting end (User Rating: 1 )
by Sbhottie288 on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 09:46:54 PM AEST
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wonderful poem...

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