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Array ( [sid] => 151350 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Would Rather [time] => 2009-07-08 07:55:59 [hometext] => I think it is love and romance but maybe it is just being hot and physical.............. [bodytext] => The cricket is on TV, and it’s not here I wish to be
I’d rather a naked embrace between you and me
To feel your breath and know your scent
To make your smile twisted and bent

A soft smooth touch across your skin
To trace your body like a sin
A firm warm kiss to your lips
And both my hands upon your hips

A dance under the moonlit sky
To give the pleasure that makes you cry
To see you glow in the night
And on your thigh a gentle bite

To make you glisten covered in sweat
To fill your body and make you wet
To hold you forever through the night
To know this love is so right.

Thursday, 9 July 2009
12:46:25 AM
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I Would Rather

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 07:55:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The cricket is on TV, and it’s not here I wish to be
I’d rather a naked embrace between you and me
To feel your breath and know your scent
To make your smile twisted and bent

A soft smooth touch across your skin
To trace your body like a sin
A firm warm kiss to your lips
And both my hands upon your hips

A dance under the moonlit sky
To give the pleasure that makes you cry
To see you glow in the night
And on your thigh a gentle bite

To make you glisten covered in sweat
To fill your body and make you wet
To hold you forever through the night
To know this love is so right.

Thursday, 9 July 2009
12:46:25 AM

Copyright Â© Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2009-07-08 07:55:59]
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Re: I Would Rather (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 09:34:04 AM AEST
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Whatever it is, Peter, it is honest and it was a pleasure to read..... A lovely, sensual write...
Jenni

Re: I Would Rather (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 03:24:06 PM AEST
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Very intense and steamy. It could be love or intense infatuation, but enjoy no matter what. Carpe Diem! I loved this piece!

Heidi

Re: I Would Rather (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th July 2009 @ 04:41:14 AM AEST
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Well, very primal and erotic. But is sex better than cricket?

-Phil

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