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Array ( [sid] => 151346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Milk and Honey [time] => 2009-07-08 06:35:23 [hometext] => (Simple and soft) [bodytext] => The woman who smells of milk and honey
and wears a tiger lily in her hair
She feels unnatural, surreal
painted down among the lavender and violets
She braids her dark brown locks loosely
and walks unafraid by the riverside

Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?

Voices in her head turn over thoughts
like rocks under the current
revealing nostalgia and damage
She kisses flower petals
and the delicacy of it,
makes her cry.

Do you see me?
Do you see me? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 49 [informant] => Inevitable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Milk and Honey

Contributed by Inevitable on Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 06:35:23 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

The woman who smells of milk and honey
and wears a tiger lily in her hair
She feels unnatural, surreal
painted down among the lavender and violets
She braids her dark brown locks loosely
and walks unafraid by the riverside

Can you feel me?
Can you feel me?

Voices in her head turn over thoughts
like rocks under the current
revealing nostalgia and damage
She kisses flower petals
and the delicacy of it,
makes her cry.

Do you see me?
Do you see me?

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2009-07-08 06:35:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Milk and Honey (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 07:14:04 AM AEST
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Sorry but no! I do not see her

Re: Milk and Honey (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th July 2009 @ 02:58:32 PM AEST
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Well constructed metaphors and again, some spellbinding imagery.

-phil

Re: Milk and Honey (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 12:09:51 PM AEST
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very pretty...thanks for sharing

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