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Array ( [sid] => 15122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fire and Water [time] => 2003-03-29 00:45:00 [hometext] => ** I am an aries, hence I am the Fire... Another is scorpio, hence they are the Water... wow, symbolism... o.O ** [bodytext] => I am the fire
Ever burning with a passion
A passion for love and freedom
My golden eyes pierce your very soul
I am the fire

She is the water
Ever graceful, but with a need
A need for attention and touch
Her slender fingers bring you close
She is the water

Fire is anger and pain
Pain of loss
Anger of betrayal
The flames grow with each breath
I am the fire

Water is temptation and allure
Alluring them to their downfall
Temptation of the senses
The waves bend at her whim
She is the water

If I am not careful
The water will extinguish me
Leaving the ashes of my former self
Arid and gray
I can’t let that happen

If she is not careful
I will infect those trusting waters
Spilling the black poison
The black poison will spread my power
Setting her aflame, red overtaking blue

I am the fire
Doomed to long for a companion
My fiery tears singe my eyes
No one can get close
Born to be alone

She is the water
Blessed with that glamorous charm
Always taking and never giving
Never giving back the affection she receives
Those fools and drenched and gone

I am fire
She is water
Either burned or drowned
She is water
I am fire [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 27 [informant] => undead_poet14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
Fire and Water

Contributed by undead_poet14 on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



I am the fire
Ever burning with a passion
A passion for love and freedom
My golden eyes pierce your very soul
I am the fire

She is the water
Ever graceful, but with a need
A need for attention and touch
Her slender fingers bring you close
She is the water

Fire is anger and pain
Pain of loss
Anger of betrayal
The flames grow with each breath
I am the fire

Water is temptation and allure
Alluring them to their downfall
Temptation of the senses
The waves bend at her whim
She is the water

If I am not careful
The water will extinguish me
Leaving the ashes of my former self
Arid and gray
I can’t let that happen

If she is not careful
I will infect those trusting waters
Spilling the black poison
The black poison will spread my power
Setting her aflame, red overtaking blue

I am the fire
Doomed to long for a companion
My fiery tears singe my eyes
No one can get close
Born to be alone

She is the water
Blessed with that glamorous charm
Always taking and never giving
Never giving back the affection she receives
Those fools and drenched and gone

I am fire
She is water
Either burned or drowned
She is water
I am fire




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Re: Fire and Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 08:58:23 AM AEST
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good write
Sharon


Re: Fire and Water (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 02:00:50 PM AEST
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This is awesome!! I'm a scorpio by the way!! Never thought of this before as you wrote it in this poem!! Wonderful! You taught me something, I'll try not too drown people!! I'm joking!! Wonderful write!!
Michelle


Re: Fire and Water (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:08:44 PM AEST
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*Scorpio w/ Scorpio rising* here lol, this poem is sooo excellent, i love it! ..but you Fire people annalize too much! i don't agree scorpio's aren't giving either, but you do have to be worthy *wink*
hugs nessa


Re: Fire and Water (User Rating: 1 )
by undead_poet14 on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 11:45:17 AM AEST
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sorry if it sounds like im dissing all scorpio people, but im really just dissing one in particular. i don't believe all scorpio people are bad. thanxs for ur comment ^^




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