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Array ( [sid] => 15121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Doin' Just Fine [time] => 2003-03-29 00:25:00 [hometext] => this poem talks about whem you love a person but they don't love you back and once you break up with them, they realize they had something real good!!! [bodytext] => You were my earty, my number one priority, I gave my love to only you, and anything in the world you asked I would do.
But somewhere down the road, you felt a change in the weather and you told.
You told me that you had to journey on, then a kiss in the wind and your love was gone.
Now you say that you made a big mistake, and that you never meant to take your love away.
Because you let our love just fall apart, you no longer have my heart.
When you said goodbye I felt so all alone, there were times at night I couldn't sleep my heart was much too weak to make it on my own.
Baby after all the misery and pain you put me through, so unfair to me girl, you're no longer my world, and I ain't missin' you at all.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Chef-Boy-R-C [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Doin' Just Fine

Contributed by Chef-Boy-R-C on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

You were my earty, my number one priority, I gave my love to only you, and anything in the world you asked I would do.
But somewhere down the road, you felt a change in the weather and you told.
You told me that you had to journey on, then a kiss in the wind and your love was gone.
Now you say that you made a big mistake, and that you never meant to take your love away.
Because you let our love just fall apart, you no longer have my heart.
When you said goodbye I felt so all alone, there were times at night I couldn't sleep my heart was much too weak to make it on my own.
Baby after all the misery and pain you put me through, so unfair to me girl, you're no longer my world, and I ain't missin' you at all....

Copyright © Chef-Boy-R-C ... [ 2003-03-29 00:25:00]
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Re: Doin' Just Fine (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 12:24:28 AM AEST
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this is pretty, sad, and im glad your doing better now, hugs always nessa

Re: Doin' Just Fine (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:53:55 PM AEST
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I've been there and I have done that. It hurts to get over them.... but it hurts more to dwell. Touching. Glad to here you are doing better.

-Amy

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