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I stare at it constantly
Thinking what went wrong
Tears gather in my eyes
As I think back to when we was happy together
Maybe we was only together for 3 months
But I have never tried in a relationship before
But I did with you and you went back to the girl
who broke your heart
I don’t get why
I haven’t hurt you so why break my heart
She hurt you and she gets you
How the ***** does that work
How come the good person never wins
Im sitting in my room
Thinking how I can maybe get you back
What if I change
What if Im better at what ever was wrong
What if is all I can say
Cause I will never know cause
You went back to her
And she doesn’t deserve u
She never did
She lied and cheated on you
How can you forgive her
And hurt some one who didn’t deserve to be hurt
Life sucks it makes me want to be dead!!
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Picture

Contributed by -nik-91- on Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 11:14:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Your picture on my wall
I stare at it constantly
Thinking what went wrong
Tears gather in my eyes
As I think back to when we was happy together
Maybe we was only together for 3 months
But I have never tried in a relationship before
But I did with you and you went back to the girl
who broke your heart
I don’t get why
I haven’t hurt you so why break my heart
She hurt you and she gets you
How the ***** does that work
How come the good person never wins
Im sitting in my room
Thinking how I can maybe get you back
What if I change
What if Im better at what ever was wrong
What if is all I can say
Cause I will never know cause
You went back to her
And she doesn’t deserve u
She never did
She lied and cheated on you
How can you forgive her
And hurt some one who didn’t deserve to be hurt
Life sucks it makes me want to be dead!!

Copyright Â© -nik-91- ... [ 2009-06-29 11:14:23]
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Re: Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Scribbles on Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 02:43:30 PM AEST
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Never go back, always move on. Only then will time heal and make you stronger. Step 1 - take that picture down from the wall. Good luck.

Re: Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 03:01:03 PM AEST
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Extremely strong piece. Many times there is no understandable reason why people decide to hurt someone to return to a relationship in which they have been the victim before. The pain is not quick to pass, but it will.

Deadwriter

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