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FLY
Contributed by
Fudge
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I wasn't there to catch your fall,
I was oblivious to hear your call.
I went away, could not be found
While your strength was crumbling down.
I planned to come back home that night,
But slumber prevailed, I could not fight.
It was when you needed me most
That I was on another coast.
But I promise you, next time you cry,
Next time you frown, next time you sigh,
I'll be there for you standing by,
And I'll give you wings so you may fly...
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Fudge
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2003-03-28 19:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: FLY
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:48:49 PM AEST (User
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ah, such lovely poetry! i hope you showed this to your partner. I just love the last line.
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Re: FLY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fudge on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:32:47 PM AEST (User
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thanks for commenting :) |
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Re: FLY
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:51:22 AM AEST (User
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This is so full of love... and compassion... show it to your partner. I strongly suggest it.
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Re: FLY
(User Rating: 1 ) by capergirl_23 on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 09:46:36 AM AEST (User
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Such a beautiful poem! I hope he understood the situation..that you could not be there for him, and if it were to happen again you would be...I loved it!!!! Especially the last 4 lines!
~Take Care~ |
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