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Between the line
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 03:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Bruised
beaten
inside
my eyes
fire and hopeful things
lack of sleep
rings upon rings
outlined
outshine
anyone in the room.
Would have
could have
should have
loved you more
burning out
need you
one touch
ignites life.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2009-06-23 15:25:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Between the line
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 04:25:54 AM AEST (User
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The flow was superb and it coalesced effortlessly with the imagery.
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Re: Between the line
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 03:55:01 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful piece of writing!
Heidi |
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