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If I Told You I Loved You, You Would Probably Run A Mile
Contributed by
Richard1506
on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 01:16:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wanted to whisper, "I love you",
I wanted to say it - I tried.
I wanted to shout it out loudly,
So I screamed it, in silence, inside.
I wanted to hold you for ever,
I wanted to be by your side.
I wanted to hold you together,
But you cut me, so deeply: I cried.
I wanted to know you much better,
I wanted so hard to explain,
But the words crashed down like a landslide
Through the floods of my bitter-sweet pain.
I know always that I'll love you
You showed me what depths could pertain.
Your love was so sweet and so perfect;
I can never love another again.
Copyright ©
Richard1506
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2009-06-23 13:16:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If I Told You I Loved You, You Would Probably Run A Mile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 03:42:04 PM AEST (User
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This was beautiful
perhaps full of
unrequited love?
I am sorry
there's just not enough
love in this world |
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Re: If I Told You I Loved You, You Would Probably Run A Mile
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 07:09:30 PM AEST (User
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Very well-written. I can truly relate to this poem. I am so sorry for this pain you have experienced. |
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Re: If I Told You I Loved You, You Would Probably Run A Mile
(User Rating: 1 ) by jessb3 on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 07:31:28 PM AEST (User
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This is beautiful but so sad. I can relate to this poem with what I'm feeling at the moment..especially the first verse:
I wanted to whisper, "I love you",
I wanted to say it - I tried.
I wanted to shout it out loudly,
So I screamed it, in silence, inside.
Great work! |
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Re: If I Told You I Loved You, You Would Probably Run A Mile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 03:47:43 PM AEST (User
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A beautiful declaration of love... Best of everything to ya...
Jenni |
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