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Cooling with touch
Invading with warmth
Gratitude oozes and stains you
Our meeting long awaited
Reunited in a common need
Exploring each other all over again
Your edges and corners
My canvas, yours to paint
This partnership doomed to fail
Yet we arise from the ashes they placed upon us
While they saw the flames lick our skins
In the heat we were melded
Beneath the fire they devoured
Our existence was indestructible
What will they say to find us today
Entwined in an everlasting embrace
Branding each other inseparable
The crevices you create
Remove the damage from my soul
They believe I dance with another
But it is you,
My silver slice lover
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My Silver Slice Lover

Contributed by guiltycircles on Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 06:36:03 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

So good to feel you near
Cooling with touch
Invading with warmth
Gratitude oozes and stains you
Our meeting long awaited
Reunited in a common need
Exploring each other all over again
Your edges and corners
My canvas, yours to paint
This partnership doomed to fail
Yet we arise from the ashes they placed upon us
While they saw the flames lick our skins
In the heat we were melded
Beneath the fire they devoured
Our existence was indestructible
What will they say to find us today
Entwined in an everlasting embrace
Branding each other inseparable
The crevices you create
Remove the damage from my soul
They believe I dance with another
But it is you,
My silver slice lover

Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2009-06-18 06:36:03]
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Re: My Silver Slice Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by mooshken26 on Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 01:34:10 PM AEST
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I liked the imagery in this poem, it hits home well.

Re: My Silver Slice Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 04:32:20 AM AEST
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I liked it. Some great imagery.

-Phil

Re: My Silver Slice Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 03:50:01 PM AEST
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wow very nice right. this poem reminds me of the time i spent with my friend. never the less its always good to wite it out . nice work

Re: My Silver Slice Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by blackroses_bleedinghearts on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 03:30:19 PM AEST
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boy did that hit home!
i'm right there beside you in this sense. i love the poem- keep it up!

Re: My Silver Slice Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by chlois on Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 09:28:20 PM AEST
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its so true you love the pain and release it brings you, the warm feeling.....very great job

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