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[aid] => mick
[title] => As Paintings Fall
[time] => 2009-06-16 15:06:22
[hometext] => Hi everyone!! :) This is my first poem submitted into the forum, I am new here, I hope that you all like it and please dont hesitate to comment exactly how you feel about it :):) Thank you!!!!
[bodytext] => The story began on a night filled with dread. A story of despair that will never leave your head. A whirlwind of sadness of love and deceit, There is no end, there is no defeat. Love never lasts, it comes and it goes. You'll find yourself starring at the eyes of your foes. Portals to worlds, magic unknown, Only evil has been feeding and unfortunately has grown. Teardrops on water, smiles in sun. Emotion evolution ever since begun Tadpole awaiting a monstrous shark, As veils of deceptiveness hide in the dark. Clinging to the walls, Waiting to fall, Watching so blankly Faces so many. Helpless and caught. To always have faught. Stuck on this wall, As paintings will fall. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => rosesarered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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