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In my eyes
As I search
The moon for you
The words I clearly think
Tip toe across my tongue
Just shy of finding their way out
How I wish
(upon a star)
That you could shrink
And walk right in
So that you could see
All that I mean to say
For my mouth
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Lost Words

Contributed by razorbladekisses on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 07:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Stars are dancing
In my eyes
As I search
The moon for you
The words I clearly think
Tip toe across my tongue
Just shy of finding their way out
How I wish
(upon a star)
That you could shrink
And walk right in
So that you could see
All that I mean to say
For my mouth
Can never find the words

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Re: Lost Words (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:50:57 PM AEST
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Great poem! I love this poem! You said it so well! There have been many times when I just couldn't find the right words. Great job!

Re: Lost Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 09:56:26 PM AEST
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I really like this poem.

I especially like this part:

How I wish
(upon a star)
That you could shrink
And walk right in
So that you could see
All that I mean to say

Take care and thank you for an enjoyable read.

Tim

Re: Lost Words (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 07:06:50 AM AEST
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your mind has the words leave your expressions. nice write.

Re: Lost Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 10:36:10 AM AEST
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it had a nice fluency and a good structure, good work.

-Phil

Re: Lost Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th September 2020 @ 01:57:29 AM AEST
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beautiful

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