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Two separate lives is what they lead
Each other's love is all they need.
Thousands of miles apart they live
But to each other, strength they give.

Recollections of his hands on her hips
Or the way he looked at her taut nips.
Memories of when their mouths did touch
Still haunt them both so very much.

Stolen touches they both shared
Tender looks that showed they cared.
How she wished they’d had some time alone
But this secret of theirs must never be known.

He dreams of being able to explore,
She fantasizes about sharing so much more.
After being made to feel so alive
Without each other how are they to survive?

Yet they know they cannot cross the line
And on each other, they can never dine.
Still, they choose to believe in their dream
And hope some day to make each other scream.

~~xXx~~ [comments] => 8 [counter] => 340 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Jenni_K [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

~Believe In The Dream~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

~~xXx~~

Two separate lives is what they lead
Each other's love is all they need.
Thousands of miles apart they live
But to each other, strength they give.

Recollections of his hands on her hips
Or the way he looked at her taut nips.
Memories of when their mouths did touch
Still haunt them both so very much.

Stolen touches they both shared
Tender looks that showed they cared.
How she wished they’d had some time alone
But this secret of theirs must never be known.

He dreams of being able to explore,
She fantasizes about sharing so much more.
After being made to feel so alive
Without each other how are they to survive?

Yet they know they cannot cross the line
And on each other, they can never dine.
Still, they choose to believe in their dream
And hope some day to make each other scream.

~~xXx~~

Copyright Â© Jenni_K ... [ 2009-06-11 19:48:22]
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 09:54:43 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni how tantilizingly beautiful.
Without dreams no one would grow.......
Reality and everyone will know.
To feel so alive, and yet never realize
Tis a hard life to surmize.
I wish with all my heart..........someday............
somewhere...........your dreams will come true!
Warm love
consue

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 01:25:22 PM AEST
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oh girlfriend,
this is awesome.
wow, this write jus leaves me speachless,
luv, huggs, blessing,
emy

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 05:46:53 PM AEST
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Jenni.
Alvery provocative poem which depicts a loot of passion. I love the line...where he dreams of being able to explore and show faniasize sharing so much more

What a interesting concett of pitting dreams against fantazeis,,,

Good Job

Will

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:23:44 PM AEST
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A wonderful write Jenni, miles of separation or Barricades oceans cannot keep true love from blooming, and My friend and it is this "HOPE some day to make each other scream" for sure.

God bless you Jenni,
With lots oflove and respect,
FRANCO.

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 11:10:43 AM AEST
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I confess to having not read your work in a while. This reminded me of why you influenced my poetry so much in my early period on this site. Your flow is just unmatchable, by anyone on this site. Each write is an education in how to be a poet. spectacular once again.

-Phil

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 05:44:42 AM AEST
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Jenni,

You do know how to write to energize the soul. Beautiful work.

Deadwriter

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by CMark86 on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 03:51:04 PM AEST
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I like it!! you can almost feel the tension of the two.. great write

Re: ~Believe In The Dream~ (User Rating: 1 )
by courtseb on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:19:49 PM AEST
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How touching! Miles apart for so long, yet they still kept dreaming only of eachother and no one else. A true testimony of true love! Beautiful!

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