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bonsai reverie
Contributed by
elle
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Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 07:48:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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elemental change
man & nature, intertwined
rhapsody of care
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-06-10 19:48:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: bonsai reverie
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 07:53:15 PM AEST (User
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I love this haiku! Very concise. Great choice of language.
Heidi |
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Re: bonsai reverie
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST (User
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:-) |
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Re: bonsai reverie
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 12:00:25 PM AEST (User
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this poem is a good poem. keep on writing. |
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Re: bonsai reverie
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loende on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 05:30:28 PM AEST (User
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SO very true. You say so much, even in
17 syllables. Great job, as always.
Be well,
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Re: bonsai reverie
(User Rating: 1 ) by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:40:23 AM AEST (User
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You're very good with your use of word - making you excellent at Haiku!
Beautiful write!
Tim |
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Re: bonsai reverie
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 05:06:38 PM AEST (User
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This haiku is wayyy better than the ones I have written!!! |
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