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Array ( [sid] => 150596 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong [time] => 2009-06-09 18:16:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Perfection seemed so much better,
When it belonged to me.
Beauty seemed so much more desirable,
Before it belonged to she.
Humor seemed so much funnier,
When it was I who smiled.
Age seemed of no importance,
Before it deemed me a child.
Words seemed so much more enticing,
When they were telling me I was the one.
Intellegence seemed so much more valuable,
Before it turned to she who had none.
All these things seemed like they were there for me,
When I thought we had a chance together.
He seemed like everything I ever wanted,
Before he left me forever. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ell_03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong

Contributed by ell_03 on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 06:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Perfection seemed so much better,
When it belonged to me.
Beauty seemed so much more desirable,
Before it belonged to she.
Humor seemed so much funnier,
When it was I who smiled.
Age seemed of no importance,
Before it deemed me a child.
Words seemed so much more enticing,
When they were telling me I was the one.
Intellegence seemed so much more valuable,
Before it turned to she who had none.
All these things seemed like they were there for me,
When I thought we had a chance together.
He seemed like everything I ever wanted,
Before he left me forever.

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2009-06-09 18:16:16]
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Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 06:43:36 PM AEST
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There's definitely a lot going on in this poem.
It was well written and quite expressive.
Good job!

Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 08:04:40 PM AEST
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Lovely write... I enjoyed the style....

Jenni

Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
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A very poignant piece of work
Sometimes our own mind convinces us that something or someone is right for us, when all the evidence suggests they are wrong

Steve

Re: The Perfect One Was Perfectly Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 03:29:57 AM AEST
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very good
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