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[aid] => mick
[title] => Just the Whiskey Talkin'
[time] => 2009-06-06 14:17:29
[hometext] => I changed this one a bit. A few parts that didn't sound right. Let me know what you think.
[bodytext] => I remember when I met you And the feelings that it brought Falling hard, Deep in love And daily thankin' God How was I so lucky What did I do to deserve this man I had met my soul-mate giving myself, all to you, with everything I had I thought the feeling was mutual Thought that you felt the same Took me to long to realize I was just a pawn in your stupid game Treat her like a princess Make her whole world feel complete Give her a couple of babies Put her in a place she knows she can't leave Then slowly you start creeping out The man you've always been Can't hide your secrets anymore Sorry babe I drank to much again You know I didn't mean it I know your not a whore It was just the whiskey talkin' Now step back so I can drink some more What was a few times a month Now is every day A half-assed hungover I'm sorry Wont make it go away You had taken away the me I knew The one I was proud to be left in its place a broken soul Who'd give anything to just be free You tell yourself you've won We are right where you want us to be All to scared to make a move You know we'll never leave You think you've broke me down Showed me I don't deserve nothing more But every broken promise and hurtful word Gives me a secret strength to get me out the door Ive watched and learned how to play your game And here is where the twist comes in The broken girl that stands before you Is about to give you a dose of your own medicine See I made a promise to our babies After you kicked my ass and passed out on the floor I wiped their tears And held them tight Promised them with all my heart we won't take this anymore We've all known this little secret The plans made behind your back You unknowingly funding our secret stash Doing anything needed to cover our tracks So baby when you wake up Take that drink to get your head out of the fog I want you to be fully aware As you look around and realize we're gone You see those babies you used to control me Deserve all the good there is in this world And now I know I am the only one to give it to them This fat stupid ugly girl As you look around our empty house and try to catch your breath Please know we'll find someone to love us right As you drink yourself to death [comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kaysea [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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