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~Sweet Revere~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 05:05:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Summer winds carried the echo's
the echo's of my heart.
Drifting with magical wings
no ending and no start.
No shadows within the moments
only blossoms of sweet repose.
A brilliant diamond to carry with me
no matter where I go.
In the hushed shadows of the eve,
I sat daydreaming of only you.
Light touches and caresses
lost inside moments of sweet revere.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-06-04 17:05:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~Sweet Revere~
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 06:04:31 PM AEST (User
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Awww very sweet write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Sweet Revere~
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 05:49:21 AM AEST (User
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just beautiful. . . I especially love the first stanza. elle |
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Re: ~Sweet Revere~
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 07:59:40 PM AEST (User
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Just masterful, well done my friend, well done.
The Phantom |
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Re: ~Sweet Revere~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Darin on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 06:37:07 PM AEST (User
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Incredible! Excellent! Even these words, Don't do your words justice! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: ~Sweet Revere~
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 10:03:54 PM AEST (User
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AwCelle, Aw Sweet Revere................
Composed very carefully with
longing & lovingly.
Whenever I read your poetry Celle............
I think each time what a "feeling" poet you've
always been, and how you express your feelings with delightful words. You just get better with each write Celle, and I'll never get tired of reading them!
Warm love,
consue |
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Re: ~Sweet Revere~
(User Rating: 1 ) by dirk-velvet on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 02:43:56 AM AEST (User
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"in the hushed shadows of the eve".
What a lovely line...in a lovely poem.
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