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Array ( [sid] => 150432 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My bestfriend [time] => 2009-06-03 17:20:00 [hometext] => My bestfriend Greg has changed my life for the better, and i love him with all of my heart. He is suffering from cancer however, and every day is one more lost. I can't imagine my life without him, tell me what you think of this before i give it to him. [bodytext] => Never have I seen such beauty, than in your smile ,
Never have i melted inside ,until your eyes were gazing into mine.
Never have i felt so safe , yet so vulnerable than when i'm in your arms.
Never have I been so scared to lose someone.
Never have i loved as much as i love you.

The beauty of the sunset cannot compare to that of the feelings i endure for you.
They are not endless, they aren't replaceable, they are only true.
Since the moment you first spoke to me it's as if everything's slid together piece by piece.
With every day you've encouraged me to be the person i want to be,
someone with virtue, someone with courage, someone who is aware of what they need in life.

Without you the awakening storm will never pass,
the clouds will never let go,
the sunset will never be so beautiful.

And when we lay there, skin to skin, cheek to cheek,
i can't help but remember how perfect you are.
If it's not the strength you have inside,
it's the care you expose,
it's the fear you do not have,
the courage you bare,
the beauty of your words,
the sweetness of your voice,
the devotion for your loved ones.

In any day, no one could compare to you.
Not with their words,
or with their dreams.
Not with their respect, or with their beauty
Not with their encouragement,
or with their accomplishments.

You've saved lives, and what is there to repay for that?
There's nothing.
You hold on when there's nothing left to hold on to,
because you are strong, because you're a fighter,
and perhaps because you know there is always something left in the end.

I cannot simply envision my life without you by my side.
You're my bestfriend, my other half.
The part the keeps my whole when my world is torn to shreads.
You're the light after a neverending storm.
And without you, I'm lost.

I could never begin to thank you enough for all you have done for me,
you showed me that there's light at the end of every tunnel,
and that no matter where life takes you, there's something you can do to change it.
You showed me what it is to be strong and to have faith,
and you taught me that to love someone is to give everything, and anything just to see their happiness,
because no matter what it is , it will be worth while in the end.

Nothing in this world is perfect, but in my eyes you are the closest it gets.
You're ridiculous at times, and sweet at others,
but you're only human, and i love you for that, i love you for every flaw and every tear,
for every memory, and every laugh, for every caress, for every kiss, for every secret ,
and for simply being you.





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My bestfriend

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Never have I seen such beauty, than in your smile ,
Never have i melted inside ,until your eyes were gazing into mine.
Never have i felt so safe , yet so vulnerable than when i'm in your arms.
Never have I been so scared to lose someone.
Never have i loved as much as i love you.

The beauty of the sunset cannot compare to that of the feelings i endure for you.
They are not endless, they aren't replaceable, they are only true.
Since the moment you first spoke to me it's as if everything's slid together piece by piece.
With every day you've encouraged me to be the person i want to be,
someone with virtue, someone with courage, someone who is aware of what they need in life.

Without you the awakening storm will never pass,
the clouds will never let go,
the sunset will never be so beautiful.

And when we lay there, skin to skin, cheek to cheek,
i can't help but remember how perfect you are.
If it's not the strength you have inside,
it's the care you expose,
it's the fear you do not have,
the courage you bare,
the beauty of your words,
the sweetness of your voice,
the devotion for your loved ones.

In any day, no one could compare to you.
Not with their words,
or with their dreams.
Not with their respect, or with their beauty
Not with their encouragement,
or with their accomplishments.

You've saved lives, and what is there to repay for that?
There's nothing.
You hold on when there's nothing left to hold on to,
because you are strong, because you're a fighter,
and perhaps because you know there is always something left in the end.

I cannot simply envision my life without you by my side.
You're my bestfriend, my other half.
The part the keeps my whole when my world is torn to shreads.
You're the light after a neverending storm.
And without you, I'm lost.

I could never begin to thank you enough for all you have done for me,
you showed me that there's light at the end of every tunnel,
and that no matter where life takes you, there's something you can do to change it.
You showed me what it is to be strong and to have faith,
and you taught me that to love someone is to give everything, and anything just to see their happiness,
because no matter what it is , it will be worth while in the end.

Nothing in this world is perfect, but in my eyes you are the closest it gets.
You're ridiculous at times, and sweet at others,
but you're only human, and i love you for that, i love you for every flaw and every tear,
for every memory, and every laugh, for every caress, for every kiss, for every secret ,
and for simply being you.









Copyright © poetrygirl1991 ... [ 2009-06-03 17:20:00]
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Re: My bestfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by imabillier on Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 07:47:31 PM AEST
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give it to him. great write


Re: My bestfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 07:49:33 PM AEST
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This poem is so beautiful and full of emotion that I am crying as I am typing this. I am so sorry a terrific person like Greg has such a devistating illness. He sounds like a beautiful person with a beautiful soul. You are very lucky to have such a special person in your life. I am sure reading this poem will mean so much to him. I hope a miracle happens and he defies the cancer. I am always available to talk if you want to.
Heidi


Re: My bestfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 03:33:23 PM AEST
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You have expressed such devotion to him, as well as shared with all of us what a wonderful person he is. The beauty in this verse is far beyond words and I have tears streaming right now. Give it to him, this is something he will treasure, it will also be something to help him heal as well. This is true inspiration and it will be to him.

Hugs and best of blessings and wishes for both of you!

Michelle


Re: My bestfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 03:36:14 PM AEST
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You have expressed such devotion to him, as well as shared with all of us what a wonderful person he is. The beauty in this verse is far beyond words and I have tears streaming right now. Give it to him, this is something he will treasure, it will also be something to help him heal as well. This is true inspiration and it will be to him.

Hugs and best of blessings and wishes for both of you!

Michelle




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