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[title] => haiku-asaurus
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[bodytext] => fossil of lost thought
embedded, supine fracture
catalyst of rhyme
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haiku-asaurus
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elle
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Sunday, 31st May 2009 @ 11:49:09 PM in AEST
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fossil of lost thought
embedded, supine fracture
catalyst of rhyme
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-05-31 23:49:09]
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Re: haiku-asaurus
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 02:15:01 AM AEST
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the title made me laugh but the haiku itself is very good
I can only appreciate that which I can't do myself
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: haiku-asaurus
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by kye on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 02:14:10 PM AEST
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Elle- You have such a signature style (in regards to) writing poetry and it is phenomenal. I can't help wondering if you don't have some sort of an ephipany every single day. You remarkably always have quality poems that are powerful, well written and full of depth.
This one is no exception. It just commanded my attention!
Kie |
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Re: haiku-asaurus
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by Lele on
Tuesday, 2nd June 2009 @ 01:01:39 PM AEST
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I like very much this HAI-KU (or HAI-KAI, that 's said in portuguese and, maybe, in japonese), it's very concise and powerful (since it's very imaginable and methaforical). It's a metalinguistic poem, isn't it?
Thanks
Leandro Monteiro Oliveira |
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Re: haiku-asaurus
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by Inevitable on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:21:58 AM AEST
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"Catalyst of rhyme"
Short yet so expressive
very talented
good job! |
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Re: haiku-asaurus
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 05:57:57 AM AEST
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| See what Kie said? Yeah, I so find myself agreeing with what Kie said so as in agreement to such I second that opinion of which Kie has documented upon this page of elle. |
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Re: haiku-asaurus
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by lee6787 on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 08:13:59 PM AEST
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| beautiful simplicity ive always enjoyed this style of poetry but usually lack the skill for it myself its excellent |
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