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[sid] => 15032
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Lost Love
[time] => 2003-03-27 20:05:00
[hometext] => ........
[bodytext] => Please forgive me
for what I am about to do
I feel my soul tearing
with the loss of you
Now my life is over
No more reasons to stay
Why did you have to go?
You left in the worst way...
I cant handle this at all
I didnt even get to say goodbye
The tears I cant control anymore
Why did you have to die?
Please dont be mad at me
When you see me again soon
For I shall take my own like also
Tonight in the light of the moon
The razor is at my wrist
The pills already downed
A rope hangs around my neck
My feet are even bound
I want no chance
in surviving this ordeal
The feelings I have for you
Are so very real
And as I glid the blade
across my largest veins
The cutting becomes uncontrollable
Exhilaration soon replaced by pain
I can feel the pills
Churning within
My vision blurrs
The room begins to spin
I kick the stool
That I'm standing upon
The noose clings tight
Seconds are ticking till Im gone
I awake in your arms
To find this just but a dream
I hold you closer and kiss you
But inside...the tears stream
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 1016
[topic] => 36
[informant] => MorbidAngel
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 24
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
Lost Love
Contributed by
MorbidAngel
on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Please forgive me
for what I am about to do
I feel my soul tearing
with the loss of you
Now my life is over
No more reasons to stay
Why did you have to go?
You left in the worst way...
I cant handle this at all
I didnt even get to say goodbye
The tears I cant control anymore
Why did you have to die?
Please dont be mad at me
When you see me again soon
For I shall take my own like also
Tonight in the light of the moon
The razor is at my wrist
The pills already downed
A rope hangs around my neck
My feet are even bound
I want no chance
in surviving this ordeal
The feelings I have for you
Are so very real
And as I glid the blade
across my largest veins
The cutting becomes uncontrollable
Exhilaration soon replaced by pain
I can feel the pills
Churning within
My vision blurrs
The room begins to spin
I kick the stool
That I'm standing upon
The noose clings tight
Seconds are ticking till Im gone
I awake in your arms
To find this just but a dream
I hold you closer and kiss you
But inside...the tears stream
Copyright ©
MorbidAngel
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2003-03-27 20:05:00]
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Re: Lost Love
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:11:28 PM AEST
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an intense write. thanks for sharing.
kara |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:22:59 PM AEST
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OUCH!!! Very deep, sad and well written poem.... Hope all is well...
Jenni |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 09:16:05 AM AEST
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OMG!!! This was amazing. Such a wonderful poem so full of emotion. I would give it 10/10 but the most you can give on this site is 5 so that is what I am gonna give it.
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Re: Lost Love
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:32:51 PM AEST
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oh this is soooo good, but quite scary!
Hope ur ok.
x_x_x |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Opium on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 12:29:46 PM AEST
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| I presume you listen to Morbid Angel the band, that's why you seem to express dark suicidal feelings, but I like your write, good poem |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 04:30:10 PM AEST
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| wow such a great feel of emotion in this one... its very disturbing to read but the way the words were put the poem was so elegant |
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Re: Lost Love
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by SpoiledBrat on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 02:52:26 PM AEST
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| omG i love that poem when i read it i was you were dieing but at the end it was reavling that it was a dream i was happy... that poem reminds me of my sis in a way she sometimes wanna do the same but thanks for sharing :) |
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Re: Lost Love
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:29:42 PM AEST
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Nice.... the emotion behind your poem was powerful... must be an intense love....
YS |
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Re: Lost Love
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by JamesHowlett on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 06:51:22 PM AEST
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| nice...very nice. great visual, with meaning. |
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Re: Lost Love
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:49:13 PM AEST
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wow, intense....you have such a way of writting that every emotion imagionable shines through, great job...i look forward to reading more from you...
Lindsey |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 09:23:20 PM AEST
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The darkness within you, once released portrays such intense emotions, I love the way your words flow with such ease entrapping readers from beginning to the end.
Very Beautiful and artfully written I look forward to more of your work. |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:18:35 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, aswell as i love your others, your another fantastic writer, keep up the good work |
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