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But towards me your heart is like steel
Not cold but tempered firm and hard
Where emotions for love are simply barred

And still you remain soft and nice
And continue to show your sugar and spice
To see you happy what more could there be
I’d walk over mountains and cross the sea

Is there nothing I can do to make things right
Or forever do I endure my sleepless night
With only a dream in my heart
A special dream I can never part

Saturday, 30 May 2009
08:58:25
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My Only Dream

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 04:06:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

With more than words to show you how I feel
But towards me your heart is like steel
Not cold but tempered firm and hard
Where emotions for love are simply barred

And still you remain soft and nice
And continue to show your sugar and spice
To see you happy what more could there be
I’d walk over mountains and cross the sea

Is there nothing I can do to make things right
Or forever do I endure my sleepless night
With only a dream in my heart
A special dream I can never part

Saturday, 30 May 2009
08:58:25

Copyright Â© Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2009-05-29 16:06:51]
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Re: My Only Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 04:30:50 PM AEST
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some good metaphors in this, great work.

-Phil

Re: My Only Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by VR2776 on Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 05:15:37 PM AEST
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This is great I can feel the yearning....this hits close to home great stuff....

Re: My Only Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by HearMeOut on Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 07:39:32 PM AEST
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I agree, the literature devices are strong. Good piece.

Re: My Only Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by musicrox13 on Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 08:37:36 PM AEST
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good read. great metaphors. keep writing.

Re: My Only Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 12:20:16 PM AEST
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Your poem is one( that not only) calls to the heart that has known love, but, it calls to the masses. It is a special poem and one that you should value. It is wonderful.

Kie *****

Re: My Only Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 06:30:41 PM AEST
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My very favourite of all your poems so far, Peter..... Well done..
Jenni

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