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Array ( [sid] => 150146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => this chemical generation [time] => 2009-05-25 11:48:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It starts with a sip, until then the bottles gone
You’re eleven and drunk, and you just can’t hold on.
Then way before you know it, you’re holding a fag
You’re twelve years old and you fancy a drag.
Thirteen, down the park, there’s a spliff on the burn
Two toke pass it, and then it’s your turn.
You blaze weed every day, your parents go poor
You’re only fourteen and you’re out of the door.
You’re fifteen, you’re convinced weed don’t touch you no more
So you start laying on pills and you gurn your teeth sore.
Then soon you’re sixteen, and you’re in love with that high
You just wanna rave and drop pills till you die.

This chemical generation will ***** with your head
All night you’re out raving, all day you’re in bed.

Seventeen in a pub, fake ID in your fist
It cost twenty pound, but you need to get *******
It’s your eighteenth birthday and you’re getting sent down
At court you’re prosecuted by the queen and her crown.
Locked up for a year for charges of violence
You’re nineteen years old and you’re living in silence.
Twenty years old and you’re back on the street,
But the people have changed; someone’s taken your seat.
You can’t get a job; don’t know where you’re heads at
Twenty one, dealing smack, what the ***** is with that.

This chemical generation will ***** with your head
All night you’re out raving, all day you’re in bed.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 21 [informant] => 123456 [notes] => Poem edited due to using prohibited words. Tricking the edit filters is not allowed. Moderator_18 May25, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
this chemical generation

Contributed by 123456 on Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 11:48:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



It starts with a sip, until then the bottles gone
You’re eleven and drunk, and you just can’t hold on.
Then way before you know it, you’re holding a fag
You’re twelve years old and you fancy a drag.
Thirteen, down the park, there’s a spliff on the burn
Two toke pass it, and then it’s your turn.
You blaze weed every day, your parents go poor
You’re only fourteen and you’re out of the door.
You’re fifteen, you’re convinced weed don’t touch you no more
So you start laying on pills and you gurn your teeth sore.
Then soon you’re sixteen, and you’re in love with that high
You just wanna rave and drop pills till you die.

This chemical generation will ***** with your head
All night you’re out raving, all day you’re in bed.

Seventeen in a pub, fake ID in your fist
It cost twenty pound, but you need to get *******
It’s your eighteenth birthday and you’re getting sent down
At court you’re prosecuted by the queen and her crown.
Locked up for a year for charges of violence
You’re nineteen years old and you’re living in silence.
Twenty years old and you’re back on the street,
But the people have changed; someone’s taken your seat.
You can’t get a job; don’t know where you’re heads at
Twenty one, dealing smack, what the ***** is with that.

This chemical generation will ***** with your head
All night you’re out raving, all day you’re in bed.




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Re: this chemical generation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 03:01:48 PM AEST
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More people need to read this poem. I love how blunt and honest this was. Great job!




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